Thursday, October 9, 2008

Some when I was 6 years old

This is a cute story that I found. I was six. When we got a computer my mom typed it out and kept it saved. The story is not finished. How do you think the story should end?


The Mystery of the Broken Window #1
Chapter 1 Getting out of school
“Hey Maddy call me when you get home I need to talk to you.”
“Ok, but if I cant then you call me and we will talk.”
“A-Ok.” Said Karen
Maddy and Karen were best friends they knew each other for 5 years.
Ring ring ring ring “Hello?.... Maddy oh Hi thanks for calling me, well I was just wanting to know if you could spend the night…I asked my mom and she said it was alright ask your mom.”
“Ok let me go see hold a second……….She said ok do you want my mom to drive over here or are you coming to get me?”
“Let me ask my mom hold really fast……….. She said we will come to get you pack your clothes and call me again and we will come.”
“Alright.” Maddy went to pack her shirt, jeans, Pjs, a sleeping bag, a pillow, tooth brush and toothpaste, her journal, her pen, her brush, and finally her swimming suit. Maddy called Karen again so she came to pick her up.
“Get your swimming suit on we are going to swim then go get something to eat”
“Ok” Maddy and Karen got out there swimming suit and went out to swim it was quit cold but they got used to it. After a hour or 2 the got tired of swimming so they wrapped tightly around in her towel they got dried off and they got ready to eat.
“I’m am glad we get to have Chinese food.” said Maddy
“Me to!” Once they got there Maddy did not order much she’s so skinny she barely can eat!
“I will take rice and a small pizza and the smallest roll you can make please.” Said Maddy
“I will have two slices of pizza some rice and beans and a roll.”
“Yes ladies I will get it to you oh sorry ma’am what would you like?”
“Oh I will take the same as my daughter.”
“All right that will be $23.78”
“Here you go and thank you”
After a little while they got there food and it was gone fast so they left.”
Chapter 2 Crash!
“I’m so glad to be home!”
“Hey Karen let me show you something.”
“Ok come in my room.”
“Weird is it I found it on the beach this watch seems so old what do you think?”
“I am not sure!”
CRASH!
“What was that?”
“I don’t know!” The 3 walked into the kitchen, the window was broken and there was a rock laying there.
“Who could of done this?”
CRASH another rock came flying through the air.
“6:00 lets go check it out”
“Look at the foot marks! There huge! Wait see that shadow? Mom zoom on your camera see what it is”
“Well I don’t know who it is but I know its description, blonde long hair, a dress on, and I could just zoom a little bit more ah ha! Its eyes are blue

2 comments:

Wm Chamberlain said...

I am guessing the girl with blond hair is really fast. Maybe she is trapped going fast and she needs help stopping. You could catch her and see if she slows down that way.

♥Emily♥ said...

Thats intresting. And maybe she did not throw the rock but the rock is flying back because she is going so fast.